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Re: SHORT STORY: Stationary Elevator
what a heart warming little story , the characters all learned their lessons and became better people. i love the Beatles reference.
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Re: The mark......part one
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Re: Dragon Market: Proluge/Chapter one
what let me get this straight your main character is a dragon? that's odd and original, i like it keep writing its a cool story
Nov 2, 2009 -
Re: The New Boy (part I I)
i am really sorry for calling agni a boy! :oops: but i still like your story but i don't see the fantasy twist to it and the second part was ...
Nov 2, 2009 -
Re: The New Boy (part I)
i am interested in your story, i like the idea of the kid from North Carolina in India it is so ironic but perhaps you should explain Angi's story a ...
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Re: the mark......prolouge
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Re: Nighttide Chapter 3: The Beginning
whoa! slow down some much action in one short paragraph i was completely lost! what power does Anya have? who was the cloaked man? and what does drake have to ...
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Re: Nighttide Chapter 1 Bad Decisions
this was an interesting start, i like the story a lot just a few things 1. it is very short for a whole chapter 2. the part that reads "He ...
Nov 1, 2009